Every year large numbers of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of migration for the individual and for society as a whole.
Nowadays
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more and more people travel to different countries in search of either livelihood or academic reason.Many people find travelling overseas is the best way to get their dreams.
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in terms
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the United States
Therefore
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many students migrate with Accept space
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different reason
for their academic enhancement.
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a different reason
different reasons
In addition
to that numerous job seekers migrate to various countries to brigthen
up their job aspects.They are looking for high earning potential that leads to a make lighter or brighter
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higher
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standard
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a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
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especially China and a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
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.a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
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fulfill
their dreams.
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ethnicities
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initially
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and understanding the prevalent culture.the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
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is more pronounced if the person does not know the local language.For example
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a foreign language
foreign language
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These are the various aspects of the migration and its effect on individual and society.in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
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