some people think that money is best gift for teenagers. others disagree. Discuss both there views and give your opinion

In
21st century
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the 21st century
,
money
is
gift
for any age people, not limited to only teenagers. Lot's of people think that
money
is the best things for youngsters, but all people not agree with it.
This
essay will describe why
money
is important for youngsters.
one
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One
the
first
side,
money
is everything for anyone in their teenage. Because teenagers require more
money
than any other age people.
they
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They
focus on their career.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
education is very costly and
also
in developing
country there
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country, there
are two types of student groups.
one
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One
from reach family and other from poor family.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
not only for
study but
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study, but
staying in university with new gadgets, clothes, cars as well as during their college
,
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,
they require lots of finance for cultural activity, sports and extra learning opportunity outside.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
that
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that's
why
money
is everything for teenagers.
other
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Other
side, some people
not agree
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aren't agreeing
because they think whatever financial aid for teenagers, they could get from education loan, from their parents.
they
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They
also
think that most teenagers waste their extra
money
like they get from
gift
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the gift
at needless places like dance-bar, weekend trips, drinks.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
they don't give
money
as
gift
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a gift
gifts
.
although
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Although
such
people don't consider teenagers financial condition. So they are
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
wrong. As per my opinion,
Firstly
we should have to know
teenagers background nature
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the teenagers background nature
for career or business, and give
money
as
gift
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a gift
gifts
.
if
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If
teenagers
not use
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don't use
aren't using
finance at
approprite
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
inappropriate
way,
definately
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money is definitely
definitely money is
money
is not best for them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial responsibility
  • budget
  • save
  • informed spending decisions
  • personal preferences
  • practical and efficient
  • unwanted or inappropriate gifts
  • impersonal
  • emotional value
  • thoughtfulness
  • personal consideration
  • wise financial decisions
  • frivolously
  • lasting memories and experiences
  • educational courses
  • hobby-related equipment
  • long-lasting positive impact
  • fostering interests and skills
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