In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Children and young men are educated differently, based on the country they live in. While in some countries it is common for teenagers to have free

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to pursue what they want to do, in other places, young men are

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impart skills or knowledge to

taught

to

work

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hard and study extensively, which comes

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the expense of their free

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. There are many reasons why these differences

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have an existence, be extant

exist

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, in my opinion, it is mainly due to the economical environment of the country and the cost of living. As parents, we are naturally interested in assisting our child as much as possible, and give him the required tools to succeed in life. As a

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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequence

consequences

, in heavily populated

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

, like China or Mexico, where it is hard to find a stable job, and buy an

apartement

a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house

apartment

, parents educate their children to study hard, and

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from an early age, so they will be able to build a career and earn a good salary. To illustrate, in Hong Kong, where the real estate prices are extremely expensive, it is

costumary

in accordance with convention or custom

customary

for children to study 10

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hours

a day, and

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from the age of 14, so they will be able to buy a house. In contrary, in Israel, where there are plenty of houses available and many job vacancies, young people spend many hours pursuing their hobbies

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of studying and working.

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it is important to

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make by combining materials and parts

build

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a career and

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hard, not having

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as much as necessary

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any

leisure

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can lead to increased pressure and anxiety, which,

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, can lead to reduced

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the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume

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efficiency.

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reason, I believe free

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should be incorporated within school hours and

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have been implemented

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has been implemented

among "google" employers, where a daily one hour free

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was implemented.

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, facilities,

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as a gym, movie

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatres

and sleeping couches

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

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make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of

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for people to use in their free

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. Interestingly, despite the reduction in working hours,

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efficiency increased

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efficiency, increased

by 20%. In conclusion, young men have varying amount of leisure

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, based on the cultural background he was educated in.

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, Unfortunately, can lead to increased pressure and anxiety. If we would

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incorporate

free hours within our

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work place

a place where work is done

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, we can reduce

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unwanted stress and increase our productivity.