you have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. write a letter to the parents. in your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be suitable person to employ. say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to apply for the job
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in the 27th issue of "Mother and
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" magazine. I know you are trying to find a short term
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care- taker
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for your six years old child. I find myself very interested in having
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positive experience with your family. My previous
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recommendations and my studies are suitable for
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opening,
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to Australia
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my father's home country. I
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believe
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that taking care of children is the most natural thing for me. I was
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older child, I have got four brothers and only one sister. All of my life I helped my parents in taking care of them. Currently, I am taking
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courses in my community college for Early childhood studies, which made me realize how passionate I am towards children.
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, I am trying to save some money for my
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. If I got accepted, in my spare time I would like to meet more of my father's family members. They never came to see us back in the United
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because of the pricey air tickets. Australia is a beautiful country which makes me excited to discover its local sites. Please let me know about your
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as soon as possible. Thank you, Dina Alaa
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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