: Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important for children's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present era, most of the primary and tertiary schools give importance to
art
subjects as well as stem subjects. Some people think that every subject
, whether it is related to arts classes like painting and drawing or curriculum subjects which includes science, maths and social science are equally important for the development of the children's. It is disagreed that art
classes are as important as other subjects because basic subjects are needed for improving the intellectual level of student and it is accepted for getting the reputed jobs too.
The first
and the foremost reason is that art
classes do not provide valuable knowledge
to the child, which can be only provided by the stem subjects. To make it more clear, the basic concept of these subjects is the base for the higher studies, and this
helps them to get higher grades in academic studies. For instance
, a recent data collected from the schools revealed that the student who has greater knowledge
of other subjects are able to perform well in the art
subjects too because some mathematical equations and science concepts used in it. Therefore
, this
makes it clear that school subjects are more important than art
subject
.
Secondly
, the knowledge
of other subjects opens job opportunities more as compared to the art
subjects. As, most of the companies need basic idea related to core subjects. Art
subjects should be included in the school curriculum as a part of the option. For example
, an article published in the newspaper clears that artistic people are struggling for a livelihood. Thus
, this
is apparent that art
subject
has less importance as compared to stem subjects.
In conclusion, basic knowledge
and more job opportunities are the main factors which make others subject
more important in a person’s life as compared to art
classes. Therefore
, major subjects should be focused more as compared to the minor subjects in the high schools. I completely disagree with the thought of giving importance to the art
classes in comparison to important subjects in the school due to above said reasons.Submitted by Rajneet Kaur on
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