School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children’s development in their educational phase is becoming a main concern in

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development of children in their educational phase is significantly important

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Both teachers and parents share the important roles to help the children develop, especially their interpersonal and cognitive skills.

However

, due to the amount of effective

time

effectiveness that children spent by

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a young person of either sex

children

in their daily life and substantive knowledge that they mostly gain get

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into

the

school

, I totally agree that teachers play much more important roles to perform and educate children to

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make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

their social

interaction

and academic life. Fundamentally, children are likely considered to spend more effective times in the

school

rather than at home.

Hence

, the

school

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is suggested

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provide children with the experience to build their social

interaction

with their teachers and friends.

Moreover

, the activity in the

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school, which

is provided by the teacher

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put to use

exerts

exerting

more interactions among the class.

For instance

, teachers can give the peer-assignment that require expect students to work and to collaborate with their peers.

This

kind of activity is believed as one of the stimulations for the children to learn how to work in a group and consult

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with

each others in order to overcome the problem that they face together.

Therefore

,

this

activity will lead to an intense

interaction

among them, and it hardly happens at home due to the fact that the small amount of

time

and

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a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

opportunities

that children can use

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for

interaction

with many people.

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,

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teachers

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the subject matter of a conversation or discussion

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fasten or secure with a rope, string, or cord

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that substantively will boost the knowledge of the children. The subjects are projected as the constructive feedback which

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importantly, exercise

importantly exercise

more challenging tasks and

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that will stimulate the children's brain to be more developed.

For example

, a language subject,

such

as

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like English or other any foreign language sis

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is

the subject that requires much effort to master.

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teachers should help the students by providing them the experiences on how they should study, learn, and acquire

such

language skills. They

also

can

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take exception to

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their children to speak in different languages which is presumably

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difficult, hard

for them if they

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not regularly

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use doing

and

practiceing

a customary way of operation or behavior

practicing

practising

it.

Therefore

, if the children are steadily exposed by

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various

activitiesy

any specific behavior

activities

activities y

,

time

by

time

their cognitive ability and skills will widely expand. At the same

time

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while the disparity will be more likely happen if the students are handled only by their parents at home. As the summary, the development

period especially

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period, especially

the student's social and intellectual ability need to be handled carefully by someone who has more experience and is an expert in

this

field. Teachers are expectedly shoulder more responsibilities to educate the students, but it

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does is

not

neccessarily

in such a manner as could not be otherwise

necessarily

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how a result is obtained or an end is achieved

means

parents lose their proportion in nurturing their children as one of the most important aspects in children's life.