“You want to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: tell him/her about your business explain why you think it is a good idea and ask him/her for some help or advice”

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Dear Neetu, Hope so you're doing splendidly! it's been ages since we caught up with each other, so,

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get the balls rolling with some pleasant tidings. You'd be thrilled to hear that

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am going to start a new business in painting, as you know I had a keen interest in painting from my school time. I thought it was a good time to invest my own skills and interests. I think that it is really a good idea to start

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business because it is one of my dreams to become a professional painter. Not only

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, but I can show my talent and interest to others and can make a good earning through

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business.

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, people will come to know about my new things by looking at my paintings and they will be alert to our actions which are affecting nature. My different designs and styles will attract more

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customers

. I want some help from you if it's possible to give me some money, I appreciate

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help and return your money within a month. I want

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help from you because I have to cover a lot of expenses as I am moving to another city because rather than in villages, I think I can do better in the city

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my studies. Thank you a lot for your help and I hope to hear from you very soon. Yours lovingly, Harsh

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coherence and cohesion

Consider adding a clearer introduction that outlines what the letter will discuss.

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Try to avoid informal phrases like 'get the balls rolling' in a letter to a friend to maintain a friendly yet appropriate tone.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. This will enhance the clarity and structure of your letter.

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You express your enthusiasm for painting and show a strong personal connection to your business idea.

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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

238 words

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