Some people believe that technology has made people’s lives easier while others think the opposite. Which do you believe and why?
Technology
is key to the growth of today’s modern world
. In this
modern world
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,
technology
is used in various ways such
as Gadgets like smart phones
, computers and innovations like automatic vacuum Correct your spelling
smartphones
cleaner
. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
While
it is true that technology
is making individuals
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individuals'
individual's
lifestyle
busier, Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
however
I believe Add the comma(s)
however,
technology
Is very important in day to day life
of an individual as technology
is making peoples
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people's
life
easier by giving out more efficiency towards work and also
allowing one to do better communication
. It is true that people
are surrounded by machines which are making their life
busier Fix the agreement mistake
lives
such
as by making them constantly use social media for responding to messages online or replying to emails and making them learn about new gadgets such
as the automatic dishwasher. Nevertheless
, the
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apply
technology
is made to help people
out with their daily tasks and make their busy life
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lives
bit
easier Correct article usage
a bit
and
helping them out with multiple tasks at the same Correct word choice
apply
time
hence
being more efficient. Few
years back Change the article
A few
people
spent a lot of time
washing dishes by hand. However
, with the help of technology
which takes care of these chores’ individuals will be left more
energy in their hands. A lot of Change preposition
with more
individuals
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individual
time
is being taken by communication
as one has to answer multiple messages from different platform
in a day, at the same Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
time
technology
is also
helping people
out with their communication
as it is easier now to communicate with people
from different part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
world
using multiple online social media options made available, most popular being the Email which is used widely around the world
. In the early days where
there was no Correct word choice
when
technology
, communicating to far distance
was only through Fix the agreement mistake
distances
letter
which used to take days to reach but now Fix the agreement mistake
letters
technology
is just making peoples
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people's
life
easier. In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
lives
technology
helps people
to be more energy efficient, saves time
and enables to
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them to
do
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apply
communication
more effectively across the Replace the word
communicate
world
. Therefore
, even though technology
is making one’s life
complicated and busy, I truly believe technology
is helping to ease a common human beings’
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being’s
life
. Hence
, technology
Is the potential need for this
modern world
and will also
go on to improve human’s
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human
life
in a better way in the coming years.Submitted by Adeel on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion