Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Computer is
one
of the greatest
invention
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inventions
of all time and is used majorly in most of the sectors. Using computer and technology has
lot
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lots
of
advantage but
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advantages, but
advantages but
it
also
has come ill-effects. Let's go ahead
and deeper dive into
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and dive deeper into
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it Computers have
became
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become
a daily
necessities
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necessity
now a days. Most of
business
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the business
can'
t
run
with out
in absence of
without
the use of it. The whole IT industry is
just
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justly
made on it. A billion dollar industry just for computers. These
price
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prices
of metal help us in lots of
way
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ways
in our daily life from booking tickets to sending data to file income tax to know anything from any part of the world. Everything is just a click away. Life has become incomplete with the computers. They have solved most of the man's
problem
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problems
. You can
seat
be seated
sit
in a room in the
one
corner of the world and communicate, teach
,
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,
talk, learn
any thing
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anything
from any part of the globe. It has so many advantages that can'
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be mentioned. But as we all know everything thing comes with come disadvantages
,
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,
one
of which it that
this
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these
machines have made us slaves. We can'
t
survive without them. Teenagers are getting addicted. Young kids are getting
explore
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explored
which they shouldn'
t
get
this
stage of
there
of them or themselves
their
life. We have no control over it and soon the machines will take over everything humans have created. To avoid
these
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we should limit our use.
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A few days
ago there
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ago, there
was a computer game which caused deaths of young kids. These are clear indication that we are
over using
exploitation to the point of diminishing returns
overusing
the
technology which
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technology, which
was built for our benefits. Neither technology nor human can stop the consequences of the overuse. We can only limit our use. In the conclusion I would like to keep the fact that anything which we was created comes with both the perspective
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