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The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that the major solution to address environmental problems is raising the costs of fossil
fuel
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 essay is going to explain why
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 is a common belief and give my opinion on it. Many people think that the use of
fuel
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 as petrol is the main cause of the ecological issues our planet is facing and the only way to prevent
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 is turning the use of fossil
fuel
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 more expensive. Because thousands tones of carbon dioxide are released daily by vehicles and factories to the ozone layer. Which has been
deplaited
no longer sufficient
depleted
deleted
deflated
.
As a result
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, we are facing alarming natural catastrophes caused by global warming.
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, the registers of cyclones in the USA's west coast has been drastically increased as well as the global temperature. In fact, the use of petrol is one of the primary causes of global warming.
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, it is not possible to cope with
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 problem only by elevating how much people pay for refilling their cars. Since
fuel
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 is an asset in our modern society. We need it to generate
energy
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 and maintain our standard levels of wellness. In other others, no matter how expensive it is, people are going to continue buying it in order to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their needs.
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, the investment in the renewable resources of
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 to drop their price would be a more efficient solution. So that people could have cleaner and cheaper options of
energy
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 and fossil
fuel
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 would lose its position in the market. To conclude, I disagree that making
fuel
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 more expensive is the right approach to fight the pollution in The Earth.
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, clean resources of
energy
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 should become an affordable alternative.

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