Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?
One of the most challenging aspects of the 21st century is the difficulty in keeping a
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it creates a threat to the existing employees because employers have the option of replacing poorly performing employees with better qualified fresh graduates and post graduates. In Linking Words
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, people should limit the Linking Words
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order
to limit the working hours.
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balance
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and personal Use synonyms
life
is becoming a major challenge in Use synonyms
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competitive society. Everyone should start to think of the value of our personal Linking Words
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and keep a Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite