Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this be solved

Overpopulation in many major urban
centres
around the world is a major
problem
. What are the causes of
this
? How can
this
be solved Well, I would like to discuss the major impacts caused because of overpopulation in
murban
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urban
centres
.
According to
my knowledge
over population
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overpopulation
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in urban
cities
is because of many reasons, I would like to take
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disucss
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discuss
on
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this
topic.
Firstly
, The
people
from different villages and
near-by
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nearby
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small towns migrate to urban
centres
,
For seeking
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to seek
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a job
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job
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jobs
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and to full fill
financial
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the financial
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aspects. Since there
is
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rapid changes
occured
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occurred
with the climate or
enviornment
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environment
of the villages, Which in turn created
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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with agriculture and other
farming related
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farming-related
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activities. Because of the above said
problem
people
loose
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their financial status and struggle to make
living
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a living
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in small
cities
, which leads them to migrate to urban
centeres
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centres
, Which will witness
increase
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an increase
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in population. To overcome the above said
problem
, Government or public sector
officies
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offices
officials
should influence
people
to stay with local
cities
by creating wellness schemes. The schemes should focus on bringing
people
back to their small
cities
and
contribute
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to wellness or good social status. If we mainly focus on programmes which will bring revenue by investing in small
business
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businesses
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such
as,
home made
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homemade
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products and opening
small scale
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industries related to local culture and habitat.
Overall
my conclusion is,
because
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of migration of
the
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people
from small towns to urban
centres
causes overpopulation. So
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should interact with the
people
from small
cities
and encourage them by helping them to
setup
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set up
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small scale
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industries which eventually boosts their self-esteem and confidence.

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