some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. others believe that school is the place to learn.

One of the most significant current discussions on children is whether parents have more responsibilities to teach children to be useful members or the teacher is enough for them.
This
essay discusses these ideas and shed some lights on both sides and expands my opinion. In recent years much more information has become available on that role of parents upon children's life that has emphasized on parent's huge impact on a child's
future
and life.
First
of all, one argument that makes secure the importance of parent's effect is when babies open their eyes just can see their parents. They grow up with them and learn their fundamental needs, speaking, eating, walking
for instance
. Many researchers believe that
first
four years of an infant's lifetime are really important to build her/his
future
. Actually, they reflect their parents manner and behaviours.
However
, there is no doubt that the teachers at school have a major influence on students. They teach different topics like mathematics, biology, chemistry and arts to prepare pupils with various ideas for
future
and make their way easier and help them to understand their interests and talents. Many times teachers can recognise the child's problem and reports it to supervisor to call family for finding a solution.
Also
, children can rely on their teachers and say something
that is
difficult to explain to their families. In general,
therefore
, it seems that the role of a teacher,
however
, it is not comparable with parents, it cannot be ignored in building a great
future
for infants. In conclusion, in my idea, we could not deny the tutor's impact on our lifetime, but as I am on belief that parents are much more important, we would be good parents for our kids because we have a heavy duty and responsibility to bring them up perfectly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • role models
  • moral values
  • social norms
  • structured environment
  • cooperation
  • respect
  • communal responsibilities
  • decision-making
  • societal integration
  • consistent messages
  • cultural expectations
  • complementary roles
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