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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?*

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There have been new developments taking place across the globe. As the times are changing, people are looking for advancements. A new trend has been observed that, people are looking for natural remedies as an alternative to medicines to cure diseases.
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 change is good as well as bad. Medicines have side effects and expensive.
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, at the same time they are the best cure. I believe that the best method to treat health issues is to take medicines as recommended by the doctors. They help in the recovery much faster than any other alternative. It is
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 important to take care of yourself by taking precautionary measures like avoiding unhealthy food, staying away from alcohol and smoking. One should make a habit of exercising daily and having
positive mindset
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a positive mindset
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, substitutes of the allopathic medicines are very slow and can be dangerous as well. Patient can take it for a long time and still his health might not improve because of the
ineffectivity
not producing an intended effect
ineffective
. Medicines are formed with a special formula and technique which makes them more useful. I do not completely disagree with the fact that natural remedies do not have side effects and actually help in curing an issue but does not have any instant effect.
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