Some people believe that not enough waste from home is recycled. They the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a law. To what extent do you believe that laws are need to make people recall their waste.

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The awareness on recycling is gradually increasing in many countries around the world. Whilst some

have argued

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argue

that households are not doing enough to re-use their

waste

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and that

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

legislation would be the best option. I agree that

such

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laws are

needed but

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needed, but

exploring other means to ensure effective to ensure

this

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should be looked into. On the one hand, the laws

would makes

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would make

it compulsory for

generated

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generating

by-product to be regenerated.

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, domestic

waste

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are not

disposed but

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disposed, but

re-used in another way and any disobedience to

such

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rules would attract a penalty.

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, since man would not want to be punished, they are bound by obligation to obey thereby playing their part to make the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

safe by obeying the law. In Zimbabwe,

for instance

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, recycling

have increased

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has increased

by 16% after the senate passed a law to enforce household on recycling processes.

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, public education is more encompassing. When a considerate amount of energy is channeled towards public enlightenment with the sole aim of making the people know the benefits of not throwing away generated wastes,

then

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more households are likely to join in the campaign.

This

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is particularly important because recycling is one of the methods used to reduce the global warming because it reduces the amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere.

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, incentives can

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be employed.

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, when citizens get certain rewards for turning their

waste

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into useful products, it does not only encourage them to do more but

also

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enable others to do the same. The Sun Newspaper revealed that an average home in Pretoria recycles majority of their

waste

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because every home that does

this

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, get some tax waver from the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

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making it the city with the highest household recycling methods. In conclusion, the law would enforce homes to do the needful by recycling wastes which is basically out of obligation and not with a sense of responsibility. It is

also

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important that we make people see the part they need to play and induce them where necessary. Only

then

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are we going to see a dramatic change.

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