You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, My name is Jay Soni and I am living in a
share
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room
in
college
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a college
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hostel since the start of
this
semester 1. The reason I am writing
this
letter to you is to inform you that my
study
is
hetting
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getting
hitting
hindered due to some infrastructural anomalies. There are few problems that
has
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become
hurdle
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in my studies,
first
is the arrangement of the
study
table and the
cupdoard
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cupboard
cupboards
. Another problem is that of the hinge of the main
door
sue to which we are unable to close the
door
properly. There are two cupboards in my
room
, one for each person but both the cupboards are placed on either side of a single
study
table we have. Though there is
place
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for two persons to comfortably sit and
study
, only one person can
study
at a time as cupboards
does
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not leave space to keep two chairs simultaneously. In another matter is of the
door
hinge which is broken from the lower side due to which we are not able to close the
door
and keep the noise out,
this
creates a very disturbing situation in our
room
. I would request you to kindly fix the problems as soon as possible because the exams are near and we need to
study
. I would
also
suggest if we can be moved to another vacant
room
if available. I would appreciate your prompt response and action in
this
matter. Yours sincerely, Jay Soni
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