During the last century, the use of cars has increased dramatically. This has caused problems such as pollution and overcrowded roads. Why do people buy cars and what can we do to stop people from buying them?

Nowadays, cars have increased dramatically as some people find it easier to reach to their work and other places.
This
essay will analyse the sudden increase of the cars and what can we do to stop them.
To begin
with, cars benefited us in many ways.
For example
, before people used to take a bus or walk to reach their destination which takes longer time rather than using a car.
Moreover
, day by day the world is turning into a cosmopolitan country.
Therefore
,
This
cause deforestation and pollution. Unfortunately, Cars seed the major role causing the earth to be filled with carbon dioxide as all the transportation is filled with fossils which is made from dead plants and humans leading to pollutants, acid rain and an excessive crowd.
However
, there are several reasons to reduce from having a moving object in the road. Government can increase the price of the cars and build a subway.
In addition
,
this
will cause less crowds in the street and pollution.
Moreover
, the government should make the prices of the bus and railways less to encourage people. To conclude, stopping a human being to stop purchasing a car is obviously impossible as some would like to follow the trends of buying cars.
Besides
, administrations should take an action if they want to stop the earth from having contamination.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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