You are planning a birthday party for a friend, but you need to make some arrangements. Write a letter to a friend who will be helping you with the party. In your letter: Explain the reason for the party Give details about the arrangements you have already made Explain how your friend can help Write at least 150 words.

#birthday #party #friend #arrangements #reason

Dear Sina, I hope

this

letter finds you well. As you may know , it is our friend , Amir's birthday next week on Monday .

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occasion

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I decided to throw a party and I want him to be surprised so please keep

this

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a secret . The gathering will be at my place on Gisha 23rd

street

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and it starts from 8PM to late into the night. I considered

to invite

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at least 30 people including boys and girls and kids.

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, I hired two famous

dj's

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DJ's

to play some nice

musics

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music

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to dance with .

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, My mom will kindly take responsibility for cooking dinner. It will be a huge help to me if you can provide some drinks and

junkfoods

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junk foods

junk food

and bring them with you . Plus , I need you to help the guests

with finding

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the location and manage their entrance time so it

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not interfere with Amir's

arriving

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time . Take care, Pouria.

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task achievement

You have effectively stated the purpose of the letter and have clearly specified the reason for the party, which fits well for the task achievement criteria.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a logical structure and appropriate signposting (Dear Sina, Take care), which shows coherence and cohesion.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

164 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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