You are planning a birthday party for a friend, but you need to make some arrangements. Write a letter to a friend who will be helping you with the party. In your letter: Explain the reason for the party Give details about the arrangements you have already made Explain how your friend can help Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sina,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. As you may know , it is our friend , Amir's birthday next week on Monday . To
that Change preposition
For
occasion
I decided to throw a party and I want him to be surprised so please keep Add a comma
occasion,
this
as
a secret .
The gathering will be at my place on Gisha 23rd Change preposition
apply
street
and it starts from 8PM to late into the night.
I considered Capitalize word
Street
to invite
at least 30 people including boys and girls and kids.Change the verb form
inviting
Also
, I hired two famous dj's
to play some nice Correct your spelling
DJ's
musics
to dance with . Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
Moreover
, My mom will kindly take responsibility for cooking dinner.
It will be a huge help to me if you can provide some drinks and junkfoods
and bring them with you .
Plus , I need you to help the guests Correct your spelling
junk foods
junk food
with finding
the location and manage their entrance time so it Wrong verb form
find
do
not interfere with Amir's Change the verb form
does
arriving
time .
Take care,
Pouria.Replace the word
arrival
Submitted by pouria.sharifzad on
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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task achievement
You have effectively stated the purpose of the letter and have clearly specified the reason for the party, which fits well for the task achievement criteria.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical structure and appropriate signposting (Dear Sina, Take care), which shows coherence and cohesion.