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There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbor. What causes this situation? How to solve it? Give your own idea.

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People, who are not aware of their
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
 are drastically increasing. In modern society, humans are busy with their hectic lifestyle and personal interests with no
time
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 to spend with the
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neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
, Lack of
time
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 due to Increasing work pressure is the major reason behind
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. There are many reasons causing
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,
firstly
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, the increasing competition
at
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in
 workplace forces humans to go an extra mile and spend more
time
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 in office to complete the targets, which lead them with no
time
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 to socialize and know the person lives in the house
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 to you.
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, few people do not want to interfere with other
people
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person's
peoples'
peoples
 privacy. They feel if they try to initiate the conversation other people may feel offended
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, they prefer not to open up with the person
next
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 door. In order to overcome
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 situation, people need to spare some
time
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 and participate in public gatherings and cultural events.
This
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 is the place where we can actually understand our
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neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
 get to know their interests.
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, these events should be organized more frequently so that people will get a chance to spend some
time
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 with their
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neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. To conclude
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, In my opinion, people should take a little break from their professional commitments and spend some
time
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 with the
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neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
neighbour
, cultural events and society
meetup
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Meetup
 will be the primary solution to
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 problem. People should
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 consider pooling their car with the
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neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
 while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to work,
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 will give them additional
time
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 to know each other.

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