Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Infrastructure and internal

strenghth

the property of being physically or mentally strong

strength

strengths

and well being

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forms the actual economy

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of

a country.

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, various people believe that external infrastructure and designer buildings are important for a

city

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to look good while others think internal factors like

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better

education and better medical services are important. As per my

opinion I

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opinion, I

am strongly in favour of

both

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the above points and I will discuss

both

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these factors in detail with examples. Talking about schools and hospitals

,

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,

for sure these facilities

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these are not only

facilities but

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facilities, but

basic necessity

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a basic necessity

for a

city

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to grow and its citizens to live happy and progressive life. Having educated citizens will help the

city

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to grow in

longer

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the long

long

run and helps in reducing social evils like crime, rape, murder, burglary and

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in fact

become a part of its growing economy.

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, in

country

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a country

countries

like

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

,

governement

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the government

government

is spending lots of money in educating the youth

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

girls.Schemes like

mid day meal

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a midday meal

midday meal

the midday meal

to attract students. Hospitals

on

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with

other hand, is the need rather than a luxury for people,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

for general people who cannot afford to go out of their town or

city

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for treatments, that should be available within the

city

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and government should invest in upgrading and opening new hospitals. Not only providing new

hospitals but

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hospitals, but

also

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making the service cheap is the duty of any government. Now, talking about

beautifing

make more beautiful

beautifying

and creating a good outer structure of big buildings of

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city

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the city

is as important as its internal factors. Good infrastructure attracts investment and tourism and

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the business and economy of the

city

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better. At

last

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, according to my viewpoint

both

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impressive buildings and internal schools and

hospitals

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hospitals, both

both

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are important for a

city

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to develop better and make its citizens happy.