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Some people say that shops should sell the food products of local markets whenever possible, rather than importing from abroad. Do you agree or disagree?

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I would like to share my feelings on
concert which
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concert, which
 you performed on
last
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 week. I hope you will definitely like my words. I attended
lot
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lots
 of
music
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 programmes
on
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in
this
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 city. I am fond of
music
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 lover. When I attended your concert, I really fed up with your ultimate singing performance. I am good at on playing
guiter
a stringed instrument usually having six strings; played by strumming or plucking
guitar
.I performed some western
music
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 events in my college anniversaries.
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, I am a good singer to sing all types of songs. I got
an
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a
 good appreciation from my friends and staff. That
intrest
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interest
interests
 made me to attend all western
music
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 concerts. But, you are
a
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an
 expert on playing all instruments. You inspired me to learn all types of
music
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 instruments. I got to know that if we got
a
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an
 idea to play different
instruements
a device that requires skill for proper use
instruments
.
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It's
 easy to sing a song with good sync. I hope that I will become a great singer like you in
future
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the future
. You are
great inspiration
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a great inspiration
 to me.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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