Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some belief think that the social service should be free by adding it in a compulsory module in a secondary school.

This

essay agrees with

this

opinion because the children will not selfish and the social will save their money.

Initially

, the social work,

such

as a charity, can improve many social skills for the children. Because they have to communicate with many people to coordinate each project and

also

knows a lot of people who lives in their village.

Furthermore

, they always think to help other people and be a good person when they grow up.

For example

, my friend his name is Mix, when he was young, he always went to the donation event and had serviced to the other people who was invited to that event. So, his neighbour had been known him and they always buy some product from Mix’s family.

In addition

this

program will reduce the spending of money, and we can use it for the other reason,

such

as the educational scholarships, improvement a public garden, and investment in a health care service.

For instance

, I live in Banmai sub district, Nonthaburi, which has a group of volunteers, they come from 2-5 students in each school. And they usually have a weekend project for clean the public place, example the temples, their school and a playground.

Besides

, they safe the budget, they

also

affect our society has more money to give some scholarship for the poor children. In conclusion, the belief about a free social service is should to be happening, since children will have kindness behaviour and we save the cost to invest in the other significant public project.

Sat Aug 17 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

277 words

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The best for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport per day, 7 day a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?

In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.