Many museums charge for admission while others are free . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages .

Today, to preserve the heritage and culture, the government is making efforts to increase the

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many art

galleries and museums have an

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fee, whereas

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some are free of cost.There are

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a plethora

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It is evident that

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offering a free pass to the visitors have a variety of merits

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an amazing offer many museums which are rarely visited by

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of people as enough folks will be lured with

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the valuable piece of

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gets huge publicity, eventually attracting more visitors. One clear example is that

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a recent survey conducted by

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today has revealed that, museums which offer free admission once a year are much famous and known to the masses as compared to other

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is paid

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there are enormous of

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the advantages

of giving free tickets to the visitors in museums

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a few drawbacks

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free visit to

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galleries will allow unlimited

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interest

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create

a massive crowd in the museum

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disobeyed, which

will surely ruin the policies of the museums

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, the

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exhibition would be valued less if there is no

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card for exhibition of

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but not the least, the maintenance of the museum is done with the collection if the

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the government

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a number

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there are few merits of free visits to

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galleries but

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galleries, but

by seeing the greatest

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of

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the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

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of free ticket far outweigh the advantages and in future

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will put negative influence on public

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