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Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make. Has this become a positive or negative development?

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In recent years, one of the highly controversial issues relates, whether
tcechnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 has a
valiuable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
 impact on
relationship
Suggestion
the relationship
 or it makes it worse.
This
 essay discusses
this
 argument and shed some light on
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 effect
one
located at or attached to
on
 human and expands my idea. Recently, much more information has become available on the role of
technology
 on relationship that has emphasized on how we can control our
life
 with
this
 development without any harmful influence on people.
First
 of all, in
this
 century,
technology
 is a part of people's
life
 and they
are bind
Suggestion
are bound
togather
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
. Different social media, Facebook, Instagram, WhatsApp and
Tuwiter
a series of chirps
Twitter
for
instance have
Accept comma addition
instance, have
huge influence
Suggestion
a huge influence
 on
friendship specialy
Accept comma addition
friendship, especially
friendship especially
on
Suggestion
with
 teenagers, as they are
verey
used as an intensifier
very
 curious to find some new friends from every part of
world
Suggestion
the world
 and have a communication with them to expand their
knowleges
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledges
 about
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
 countries and their cultures.The other significant impact of
technology
 is that makes easier chat and call for people,
specificly
in distinction from others
specifically
 for students who are studying in other
citys
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
 or countries, so they can easily have voice or
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
 call with their families and old friends.
On the other hand
, using the social media and just listening and following various part of their news, or having chat with some strangers can cause
negative affect
Suggestion
negative effects
negative effect
a negative effect
 on human's lifetime. The other important harmful influence that makes parents really worry is, their children
instead
 of spending their time with family and real pupils, spend most of their
life
 on the net to finding new friends and followers.
however
Suggestion
However
, they do not have any understanding and information about them. Generally,
therefore
, it seems that, every new thing brings both
side
Suggestion
sides
 with
itselfe
the thing named or in question
it
itself
.
people
Suggestion
People
 have to know how they can use it to be useful. In conclusion, in my opinion,
technology
 helps our
life
 to be more convenient and enjoyable. It would be better if we manage our time for
useing
an act that exploits or victimizes someone (treats them unfairly)
using
 it correctly.
definitely
Suggestion
Definitely
 it can give us more happiness and delightful.
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