Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some believe that a
government
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should build more railroads rather than highways and roads. To a certain point, I would agree with the statement, but I
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believe that the decision of building railways or roads should be decided
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based
on the natural condition of the area and the preference of citizens. On the one hand, it is understandable if some people think that a
government
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should expand more railroads rather than roads and streets.
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, it is obvious that when a country has extensive rail networks, it will positively affect the logistic cost. The selling price of many goods would be cheaper since a single locomotive could carry tonnes of crops, goods or liquor.
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, by building integrated subway stations in city areas, traffic congestion could be avoided.
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, as Singapore has a very good train network, called MRT, most of the people rarely drive on their own vehicles.
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, Singapore is free from traffic congestion and air pollution.
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, it is
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important for a
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to have some feasibility study regarding the geological condition of an area before they plan to improve railroads. It is a fact that some areas might not be feasible for railways, as those areas might be
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swamped
or have rocky mountains. Should the
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build railway networks, the investment cost might be unreasonable.
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, the island of Borneo in Indonesia is one of the largest islands in the world, but most of the areas are swamps. It is not suitable for
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railroads, but
as the island
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has
wide and long rivers
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as the Mahakam and Kapuas, the
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could focus more on building water transportation there. The preference of citizens should
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be considered before investing
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in
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the construction
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of
railroads or highways. In conclusion, to a certain extent, I would agree that governments should build more railroads than roads and highways. But I do believe that governments should
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make considerable measurement before they spend money on railways. They must ensure that their areas are suitable for rail network and people prefer that transportation system.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon emissions
  • Mass transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Economic growth
  • Regional development
  • Initial investment
  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
  • Modal shift
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