You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter •give details of the job •explain why it is important for you •suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr Mike
I hope
this
letter
finds you well. I am Jane. I have been your student in secondary school. Actually, I am writing this
letter
to ask you whether it is possible to give me a reference letter
or not. I need it to be recruited in an office
.
This
office
works in selling and retailing professionally; especially in export and import activities. As their previous accountant becomes retired,the office
needs an accountant with one year's experience Also
, as they have several international relationships, they need a translator. I filled out a form for both of them and set the appointments for an interview. Yesterday, they called me about my documents. I had all of them except the reference letter
.
To tell the truth, I do need these jobs for two fundamental reasons. In one place, the salary and remunerations are highly tempting and meet my needs. In second place, this
office
has an excellent reputation and If I were able to catch this
job, I would enhance my employment prospects and develop my CV.
They did not tell me what should be written in the letter
. I think It would be great If you indicated my Positive manners such
as punctuality or honesty and also
, as I have about three years experience in a high-quality company besides
my high-level education, I think it would be strongly impressive if you indicated this
issue.
It is my pleasure if you accept my request. I am looking forward to your response. I will write the name and address of the office
for you.
Sincerely
JSubmitted by Maral.qanbarii1992 on
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coherence cohesion
Try to break down some longer paragraphs into shorter ones to improve readability and focus on single ideas. This can help make your letter clearer and more organized.
task achievement
Be sure to proofread for minor language errors such as word choice, verb tense, and sentence structure to make your letter more polished. For example, 'to give me a reference letter or not' could be simplified to 'to write me a reference letter.'
task achievement
You have provided all the necessary details about the job, why it's important to you, and what should be included in the reference letter.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear beginning, body, and closing, which makes it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite