Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the era of economic crisis disappointing regarding
job
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and shortage of financial assets is now common. Some people think that it is better to accept
such
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a scenario and other opines that doing effort is the only way to better condition. I shall discuss both views and give my point of view regarding
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issue.
To begin
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with, a major reason behind unsatisfactory
to
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for
a
job
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is lower pay for
work
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the work
. In developing
countries people
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countries, people
often work with a lower payment,
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scenario rise stratification to a
job
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.
Secondly
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, competition plays
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a huge role. There is a tough competition between employees so some time employees are not able to handle
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pressure and
feeling
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feelings
the feeling
of disappointment will rise.
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, sometimes internal conflict is
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behind
such
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condition and due to conflict employees or worker does not manage a healthy relationship with their boss and colleagues.
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, nowadays there are more and more
job
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-seekers.
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, companies get hundreds of
application
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applications
for one vacancy so the majority of the population is unemployed and they are suffering to financial shortage. On the other side, some people think that we have to do something for improvement in
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a situation. In days of
competition employers
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competition, employers
have to able keep a healthy environment, for
good performance they
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good performance, they
can give reward to the best employee so feeling of disappointment would not rise, companies can give
job
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security and they should have given
proper
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Proper
salary to a deserving candidate.
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, the government can do a lot for the financial crisis, they can employ youth if everyone has a
job
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then
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chances of suffering from money shortage will reduce.
Besides
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, some employees think that they are overqualified for a
job
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so they do not get
job
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opportunities. To sum up, in my opinion, the best way to survive
this
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situation is making some effort
for
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to
better condition. Government,
job
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provider and higher authorities of companies should help a lot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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