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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Music Bringing People Together (IELTS Cambridge 14)

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The given diagram illustrates the steps of generating
electricity
 in a hydroelectric
power
station
.
First
 of all, there were
servals
performance of duties or provision of space and equipment helpful to others
services
 steps included in generating
electricity
. We can see that
water
 from the river stored
at
Suggestion
in
 a high-level reservoir in the dam.
Secondly
, intake which used to flow
water
 into the
power
station
 was open at
day
time
 and remain closed at night.
Thirdly
, in a
day
the time after sunrise and before sunset while it is light outside
daytime
time
,
water
 flows via intake in
power
station
 for generating
electricity
.
On
Suggestion
In
 the
next
 step, the generator operates by reversible turbines at
day
time
 and supply
electricity
 by
powerlines
Suggestion
power lines
to
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To
 the national grid and remained
water
 stored in a low-level reservoir at
day
time
. When it came to night
water
 flows to
power
station
 again
and
Suggestion
And
 here with the help of turbines,
water
 pushed to upward at high-level
a
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A
 reservoir in the dam. Overall, for generating
electricity
 in
hydroelectric
Suggestion
a hydroelectric power station
hydroelectric power stations
power
station
 contained many steps and whole process divided
in
Suggestion
into
day
 and night.
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