People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on an individual and on society ?

An average person needs
atleast
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at least
8 hours of sleep daily to feel refreshed. The number of hours people
our
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
sleeping has reduced in many countries due to work pressure and with constant use of social media because of
this
individual’s health and overall societies well being has been negatively
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
.
This
essay will discuss why people are sleeping less than before and
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
effects on them and the
society
as well. People
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
have poor work-life balance and our glued to social media applications. The working environment is more competitive than before with higher targets set every quarter to achieve,
moreover
everyone is constantly checking and refreshing for new updates as they have a fear of missing out on new information.
For instance
, an average user spends around 6 hours daily on social media and is ready to sacrifice their sleep for it.
This
has lead to the whole
society
being sleep deprived and feeling tired. Sleep deprivation has
lead
Suggestion
led
to serious effects on the health of the
society
and individuals. Due to lack of sleep people have suffered from illness
such
as high blood pressure and depression,
for example
:
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:
a recent study revealed that 70% of people suffering from depression sleep less than 6 hours a day. Overall the
society
is
also
getting effected as
their
in or at that place
there
has been an increase in the number of road accidents because of fatigue.
Thus
, sleeping less than what is needed by the body can disturb the balance of the
society
. In conclusion, people are sleeping less than needed in many countries because of no work-life balance and addiction to social media.
This
has not just
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
the health of the individuals
negatively but
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negatively, but
the
society
as a whole.
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