Some people think that increasing the number of police officers on the street is the only effective way to reduce crime. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the growth of

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officers on every road is the most effective

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way, resulting

in the decrease of

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rates. While

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may suit with many people, I believe that there are many other methods to reduce

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. On the one hand, a large

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of

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officers can stop or reduce some violent

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on the street.

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police man

a member of a police force

policeman

with a gun can make offenders feel anxious, alert, and do not dare to commit their crimes.

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is because they are afraid of being detected, and being able to be arrested and imprisoned.

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, if robberies or thieveries happen on the road, the

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can solve promptly, and arrest criminals for judgment.

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, more

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officers can assist the local

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to control the area and

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rates.

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government

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the government

would have to spend much more money on employing more and more policemen.

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, there are many other methods to solve

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problem rather than increasing the

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of

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officers.

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, developing economy is a good solution to reduce the

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of offenders. In some rural areas, many people are still poor, so they rob or thieve to survival through day.

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, economic development creates many job opportunities, which help people can have stable jobs, earn for their living, and they do not need to rob or thieve.

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, the

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should popularize for people about much legal knowledge to become good citizens and responsible workers. It can be seen that many people commit crimes due to their lower lever education about the law.

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, the

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should consider and improve suitably judicial system and punishment mechanism. In conclusion, the

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should focus on developing

economy

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the economy

, popularizing education, and improving judicial system, punishment mechanism rather than increasing the

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of

police

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officers to decrease

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.