Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Different modes of transportation

has been

Suggestion

have been

a boon to the humans, as they have made our life easier and comfortable. As the question arises whether the government should spend money on railway rather than roads, I personally disagree with that.

First

of all, in the context of Nepal, roads has been the easier means of transportation that has connected even the remote areas of the country nowadays.Example: People from

solukhumbhu

used to travel for 2-3 days to reach

Kathmandu but

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Kathmandu, but

now jeeps are available that will take only 7-8 hours to reach there.

This

became possible only due to the construction of roads despite the

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

geographical structure.

Secondly

, due to the inexpensive amount,

majority

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the majority

of people can travel around the nation which has given access to good education

Accept space

healthcare

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health care

services & many others whereas railways are present only in the borders of Nepal & India.

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Age

: In the eastern part, we have Siliguri-NJP border and to reach

siliguri

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Siliguri

we must take a bus or Jeep.Due to

this

, Nepalese people travel through train only if they need to go to India. In fact, there are a lot of people who haven’t seen a train in their real life.

Finally

advancement

Suggestion

the advancement

in roadways has brought remarkable progress in the life of people in our country which is a positive sign that ‘Nepal is changing’. Construction of new roads as well as

redevelopment

Suggestion

the redevelopment

of existing ones will surely be beneficial and lead the nation towards success. To conclude, I believe that

government

Suggestion

the government

of our country should invest money on

roads keeping

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roads, keeping

railways in the

priority.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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