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Some say that young and energetic employees are the most valuable for the company, others argue that older employees have more experience and knowledge.

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People believe that older workers who have more than 10 years experience can deal with problems than those who are still young and lack of experience
.
Accept space
.
 In my opinion, I think that young people can
also
 do things very well. Some people say that
older worker
Suggestion
older workers
the older worker
 can
work
 better than others because they have a lot of knowledge from years to years.
However
, they
can not
can not
cannot
 focus on their
work
 or stay no longer in the company.
Moreover
, they easily get the physical diseases.
Finally
, they can
work
 around the clock so the process of the
work
 is delayed and it brings their products to be a bad one, On the other side, other people argue that young ones can
also
 make a good performance.People value
creative
Suggestion
creation
creativity
-thinking is better than technical and soft skills.
In addition
, they can
also
 do things well and they are good at working at
workplace
Suggestion
a workplace
the workplace
.
Furthermore
, they can find their feet in every situation and they have more motivation to keep working.What's more, they like studying to use that
things
Suggestion
thing
 in real life. In conclusion, both of young and older workers have their own advantages and drawbacks. I suggest that the companies should take the young ones as a worker.

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