The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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Since English has been
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influencing the world
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as interns
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of people and countries are interchanged enormous information or some things to become
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closer
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has also contributed
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contributed in the development of tourism, which helps in communication and economically in the industry, because having Are
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spoken will be no strong barriers between countries as as everyone can go to any other country and survive without many problems by
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communicating
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a universal language
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does not
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languages, followed by
their cultures. Own culture is the most beautiful meaning
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individual
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it shows all the cultures and traditions to disappear
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while people who travel abroad and
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experiences, new
life as boring if we use one
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in the
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Traveling
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makes tourists who get rid of stress or gives specific soul. Unless countries have their own
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no one will be willing to travel overseas because they will not catch attractive from outside of their country as
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they will lose own way of life and each
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perspective
from various cultures. In conclusion, while there are plus points to having a global
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but it would be lost many points. Maintaining local languages and cultures should be prominent to ensure a rich
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for heritage and
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generations
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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