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People with ten or ore years experience at work are far more knowledgeable than people still in their twenties

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Nowadays, people have more than 10 years experience can do the job with a good result more than those who lack of experienced years
at
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of
work
. In my opinion, I am on the side that young people
also
 do a
well
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good
 job at their workplace. Some people believe that older workers have the ability to deal with the problem and they
also
 are knowledgeable through working for many years.
However
, they are old and they
can not
can not
cannot
 do the heavy
lift
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lifting
 or stay longer in the company because they can easily get physical diseases. One of other important reasons, they
can not
can not
cannot
work
 around the clock. For that reason, the process of the
work
is usually delay
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usually delays
 and most importantly, it brings their products to be a bad one.
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On
 the other side, other people think that young people can
also
 make a good
performancw
a dramatic or musical entertainment
performance
at
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in
of
 their
work
.
In addition
, people value the creative thinking is better than technical and soft skills in the real life.
Moreover
, the young ones try harder and they always learn the new things positively that they can use it in their job after graduation.
Furthermore
, they have the ability to communicate with others and they can find their feet
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appropriate to; intended for
for
 every occupation.
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Last
 but not least, they are good at remembering things well.
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To
 sum up,
bothh
two things or people together
both
booth
path
 of young or elderly workers have their own advantages and drawbacks. For me, I suggest the companies should choose the young people as a worker.
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