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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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These days people do many home parties and go out in the restaurants. They order
food
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 in huge quantities and it gets wasted because it is not ordered in limited
quantity
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 and neither, they do value the
food
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. It can be managed by having proper estimates and giving the left over
food
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 to the needy ones.
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, the major reason behind wasting the
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 is that, while having the get together the actual
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 that needs to ordered is not calculated due to a big group of people. Every individual has different choice which leads to a large amount of
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.
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, sometimes, the risk of getting embarrassed in front of the guests results in more
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 than required.
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, some individuals do not give importance to
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 as they get it very easily and do not realize that there are many poor people who struggle to even have one time meal properly. There are many ways in which the wastage of
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 can be minimized. To start with, it is important for the host to make sure about the choices and take a rough idea of he
quantity
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 required beforehand. It will ensure that the
food
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 prepared or ordered will be sufficient and would not be thrown away.
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, these items should be prepared which could be used the following day.
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,
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 of throwing the eatables, it could be given to the needy.
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, in some societies in Gurgaon, the left over
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 is stored in a common refrigerator which is given to poor people. In conclusion, in present days people waste a lot of
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 because their inefficiency to ask right amount and their ignorance towards the significance of
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. It can be reduced by having accurate idea and by donating the excessive eatables.
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