More and more schools allow fast food restaurant to sell their products to their students.Is it a positive or a negative development?
This
is definitely a negative development for it has given rise to many drawbacks.
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drawback involves the first or highest in an ordering or series
first
negative effect
on children`s Suggestion
a negative effect
negative effects
health
. Use synonyms
Students especially
those at Accept comma addition
Students, especially
young
ages do not have strong abilities of self-control. They can be easily attracted even though they are clear that those fast Suggestion
younger
food
is demerit good which will Use synonyms
threat
their something considered choice to eat
treat
health
. Use synonyms
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easy to understand. Suggestion
It's
For example
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a choice between cola and water, Suggestion
to make
then
it is absolutely cola, which may cause obesity. In a nutshell, the decision of allowing fast Linking Words
food
restaurant can bring harm to students` Use synonyms
health
.
Aside from the threat on students` Use synonyms
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, the phenomenon Use synonyms
also
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negative effect
on the formation of eating habit. It is quite important because it mainly affects people`s preference of dishes. If they are getting used to have fast Suggestion
a negative effect
negative effects
food
at young ages, Use synonyms
then
it is really Linking Words
helped
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helping
for
development of unhealthy eating habit, which is hard to be corrected in the future. Suggestion
in
For instance
, it is difficult for Mexican to eat without Linking Words
chili
, because it is not only their preference, but ground beef and chili peppers or chili powder often with tomatoes and kidney beans
chilli
also
is their eating habit, which is the most important factor. In short, the permission of setting fast Linking Words
food
restaurant in schools could bring significant negative effect on children.
Tough people might not recognize the cost of consuming fast Use synonyms
food
, but it is necessary Use synonyms
of
us to be realized. Suggestion
by
for
For
many countries Suggestion
In
such
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China and Korea, fast to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
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food
is a kind of import good, so Use synonyms
it
even generally more expensive than other dishes. it is
it's
Hence
, different from what is happening in America that many people consume it because it is cheaper and they have no better choice. In short, especially for students in school, it must be a big amount of cost.
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are many advantages. Undoubtedly, it saves time. For students Accept comma addition
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are missing time of lunch because of remaining the person or persons that; the one that
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good
choice of them to buy some fast Suggestion
the best
food
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such
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hamburgers, which are portable and fast. to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
Although
it seems awesome, its drawbacks still outweigh benefits, which cannot be ignored by people.Linking Words
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