In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on the styles of their houses.

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It is a fact that more and more cities have little regulation of building and construction. While
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development can satisfy the demands of many individuals and companies, I tend to feel the negatives of
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outweigh its positives in many ways. One of the great advantages of less control is the fact that designers can freely express their creativity in term of creating unique architectures.
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, they are allowed to take more risks and experiments with various shapes and materials, which makes the cities look incredibly attractive to tourists.
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, it can speed up the building process because the governments rarely interfere
in
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with
construction. Apart from the aforementioned benefits are the massive drawbacks to both the city and its citizens.
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, less regulation cannot compromise safety. If the authorities do not tend to supervise the building process, there can be
houses
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housed
with poor constructions which are not approved safe enough for people to stay in.
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, those houses can be collapsed when earthquakes occur or can run down in
short period
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a short period
of time, which is a life-threatening problem.
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, many buildings with bizarre exteriors can make the locals feel uncomfortable and
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, they can ruin the overall layout of the area.
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but not least, the government cannot maintain a
standardization
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standard
of houses in the future because each property now has a different style and to make it happen takes a lot of work and money. In conclusion, I think that,
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there are clearly advantages of
few controls
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the few controls
for accommodations and architectures, it is necessary for authorities
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pass
a law to manage the standard of each construction.
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