Government should spend money on railways more than roads.
Government
should spend money on Correct article usage
The government
railways
more than roads
. I agree that Change preposition
on roads
Correct article usage
the government
government
budget should Correct article usage
the government
spend
on trains and Wrong verb form
be spent
railway
development more than spend money on roads because trains are Replace the word
environmentally
environment
friendly transport more than Replace the word
environmentally
cars
and railways
can solve the traffic
problem
.
Investment in railway
systems
can improve the quality of public transportation. If the country has the
effective Correct article usage
an
railway
systems
, Fix the agreement mistake
system
people
will use trains more than private cars
. Decreasing a
number of car usage can reduce air pollution from Change the article
the
cars
. People
have a good life when they stay in a good environment. For example
, Singapore is a country which has the
effective Correct article usage
apply
railways
around the city, this
country has a lot of train stations. The private
car is not necessary for Correct article usage
Private
people
, so air pollution from cars
is not a problem
in Singapore. It is a good environment for living.
At the same time, when people
choose to travel to work by a
train, Remove the article
apply
people
will use the private cars
lower. This
is solving the traffic
problem
, and commuters also
use less time to travel to work by public transport when they do not have a problem
with traffic
jam
. MRT and BTS are Fix the agreement mistake
jams
railway
systems
in Bangkok, for instance
, people
from residential areas can go to the city centre in one hour by a
train Correct article usage
apply
while
it uses
more than two hours if travel by Verb problem
takes
a
car on the same route.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
government
should invest in Add an article
the government
railway
systems
rather than roads, because railways
give
Verb problem
apply
the
benefit Correct article usage
apply
to
the community by Change preposition
apply
reduce
Wrong verb form
reducing
pollutions
and Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
solve
the Wrong verb form
solving
traffic
problem
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Lexical resource
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