Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweighs the disadvantages.

Some museums charge for
entrance
fee
while some do not. In my opinion, I think the merit of charging an
entrance
fee
, which is creation of
income
for smooth operation overshadows the drawback which is the incidence of low turnout. Admittedly, a major disadvantage of
this
fee
is the low turnout of visitors to the
museum
. Museums house antiques and artefacts for both educational purposes and
also
to enlighten the members of the public about their historical cultures. If a
fee
is attached to
such
places, people might be discouraged because on a regular basis a
museum
is not a place people love to go for leisure. Take
for instance
, when the national
museum
in Japan opened and attached an
entrance
fee
, there was a very low turnout and the managers had to go back to the drawing board to review their terms. Despite the fact that attaching a
fee
might reduce attendance rate of visitors, an
income
is favourable for the
museum
as
this
will be used to run the operations and
also
manage the
museum
. Lots of funds go into running a
museum
before it can be done effectively. The Hongkong
museum
,
for instance
, hosts monthly conferences and educational shows and In order to ensure that these shows go well, experienced teachers and lecturers are hired as tour guides and they have to be paid,
hence
, the need for
income
cannot be over-emphasized. To conclude, while weighing the merits and drawbacks of
entrance
fee
, the advantages still overshadow the disadvantages, as
income
is very much necessary to run a
museum
and to enable smooth operation.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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