The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in lives of famous people? Do you think it is a good thing?

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The famous celebrities coming from simple and ordinary backgrounds are getting media attention off late and

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, gaining popularity.

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, in my opinion, it’s a good thing mainly for two reasons.

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of all, because of the mass and

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of all, for the media’s own benefits.

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, the large audience who dreams of living their idol’s lifestyle is an important factor for the media to cover the famous celebrities. The mass loves all kinds of glitz and glamour that goes around the lives of the famous and successful people.

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, if any actress like Priyanka Chopra Jonas or Julia Roberts wears a beautiful shimmery designer outfit or a pair of shoes by Jimmy Choo, the fans immediately want to pick up the trend and try to follow these actresses. People start looking here, there and everywhere to find

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stuff even

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stuff, even

if it’s a copied version. They get confidence by watching and following

their

objective case of they

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idol’s as they think that if these celebrities can make it so big coming from an ordinary background and transform their life completely,

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why can’t they do so.

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, these

stars

a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program

stories

get more and more media attention.

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, as the media covers the lives of the celebrities and click pictures wherever they go, these stars are constantly followed by their fans on different social media.

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, when the celebrities are travelling somewhere, their pictures are clicked at the airport, in restaurants, some launch events in a

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mall, etc.

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due to which the media channels are

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getting famous for maximum coverage.

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this

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, they get more number of advertisements which is eventually beneficial for a channel to run successfully. Media personnel put all their efforts to get the work done. All in all, I don’t find any harm in the rise of media’s attention towards famous and successful people. In fact, I consider it to be a good way to benefit everyone, be it stars,

audience

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the audience

or the media itself.

Mon Aug 19 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

332 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

celebrity
ordinary backgrounds
interest
curiosity
fascination
escapism
entertainment
inspiration
motivation
identification
relatability
social comparison
envy
public interest
negative effects
excessive focus

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The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in lives of famous people? Do you think it is a good thing?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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