Government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets some people think that gov is wasting money and should spend more on addressing the problems of public

I think
this
money spending is good for the future. Scientists are
get
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getting
lot
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lots
of information from these discovering. Anyway, people should know that are
happen
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happening
outside our planet.
This
help
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helps
with
imagination
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the imagination
for
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of
our children and adults. Spending money to public problems are very
impornant
of great significance or value
important
too. Many people need governance help -
homeles
without nationality or citizenship
homeless
, ill people. I think it's a big problem, but investments
to
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for
in
the future are better money spending.
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