Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

Dear Sir, I am writing to show my interest in one of your computer courses for which
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web designing which is the main focus of these classes. I checked the enrolment criteria for the course, but I am not eligible for that. Due to certain family conditions, I could not complete my course due to which I don’t have a certification of the required elementary program. But I would like to enrol for
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certification. I want to know if any special exemptions can be given to the candidates as earlier certain exceptions were given to some cases in your education centre for different classes. By completing the certification, I can get a good job in computing and assure you that I will provide glory to your institution name. I request you to consider my case for
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the computing program. Hope to hear from you soon. Awaiting
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your response. Yours faithfully, Seema

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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