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Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation? What is your opinion?

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There is a question of whether the significance of English as an international
language
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 would be lost or increased with the rise
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of
globalization
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. In my opinion, I consider that the significance of English
language
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 can only increase, as it's the
world
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's number one
language
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 and quite easy to learn. A good reason why the significance of
English
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the English language
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 would increase alongside
globalization
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 is that it's the
world
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's
first
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language
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,
in other words
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, it is widely accepted in every nation of the
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 and the main
language
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 of communication in most countries
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, when a visitor enters any country, the
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 he communities with is English. Another reason why the relevance of
English
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the English language
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 with
globalization
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 will increase simultaneously is that
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it is
it's
 the easiest
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 to learn. It doesn't entail technicalities in comparison with
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one or some or every or all without specification
any
 other languages
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 as Chinese and Spanish. Move over, the speaker's accent has little or no effect on the understanding of the
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,
English
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the English language
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 will always be relevant, irrespective of
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 as
this
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 is the
language
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 used to communicate in most schools all around the
world
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. There might even come a time when no one would be able to afford not to speak in English, as
this
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 would go a long way in succeeding. In conclusion, I believe that English
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 will always
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increase
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 as its widely spoken all around the
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lingua franca
  • multinational
  • dissemination
  • predominance
  • digital age
  • geopolitical shifts
  • linguistic diversity
  • culture proliferation
  • academic journals
  • technological innovation
  • economic integration
  • cultural homogenization
  • language preservation
  • bloc
  • subjugate
  • marginalization
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