Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customes and behaviour. Others think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Duscuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that every country has its own
culture
, and there has been a debate on whether visitors should follow the local Use synonyms
culture
or the cultural differences should be accepted. Use synonyms
This
essay will examine both opinions and show my own perspective, which is the local Linking Words
culture
has to be prioritized.
The main reason that some people say outsiders should follow cultural rules is that it is the best way to avoid any unpredictable conflict. To illustrate, in my country, Japan, everyone needs to take off their shoes inside. If foreigners did not do so, Japanese people will get angry and be Use synonyms
demotivate
to welcome them. Suggestion
However
, Linking Words
this
is not an inevitable trouble if they learn about the Linking Words
culture
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, understanding and following the local Linking Words
culture
is crucial to avoid any trouble.
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On the other hand
, others claim that cultural differences should be embraced. The major reason for Linking Words
this
is that more tourists can be expected if they allow them more freedom. Linking Words
For example
, it is religiously not allowed to drink Linking Words
alchol
in Muslim countries, and a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent
alcohol
this
can be a Linking Words
reaon
that prevents potential a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
travelers
from visiting there. a person who changes location
travellers
However
, it is important to raise tourists' satisfaction in order to promote tourism. Linking Words
This
is why some people say that countries whose rules are too strict to visitors should allow them to behave freely.
In conclusion, considering both views, I tend to believe that visitors should respect and follow the local Linking Words
culture
. Use synonyms
Although
I admit that cultural diversity should not be ignored, following the local Linking Words
culture
is beneficial and safe for both visitors and locals.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite