The bar chart illustrates the amounts of electrical generation and electrical usage in 2014 in ten nations.

The bar chart illustrates the amounts of electrical generation and electrical usage in 2014 in ten nations.
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The bar chart illustrates the amounts of
electricity
generation and
electricity
usage in 2014 in ten nations.
Overall
, almost all the countries had
the
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amount of
electricity
produced higher than that consumed, except for Germany. China witnessed the largest number of
billion
kWh
in production and consumption. In 2014, the largest amounts of
electricity
produced and used were seen in China, at 5398 and 5322
billion
kWh
, respectively. In the US, 4099 and 3866
billion
kWh
of electrical generation and consumption, respectively, were the following largest numbers. The figures were nearly four times higher than those in Russia, at 1057
billion
kWh
of production and 1038
billion
kWh
of usage. For the other nations, the numbers of
billion
kWh
electricity
were lower than 1000
billion
kWh
.
Furthermore
, Germany was the only nation in the nations investigated that
electricity
consumption was higher than
electricity
production, at 582.5 and 526.6
billion
kWh
, respectively.

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