Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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At present
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is one of the essential parts of our daily
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. Many people of today's society are of the opinion that
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is the blessings of modern science which make our
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more comfortable and handy while others oppose
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concept but my inclination is toward the former. On one hand, it is argued that due to the more dependency on the
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,
life
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is more tensed and complicated now. The most vital point for the demand which can
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be mentioned is that excessive technology based recent
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.
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, modern school education systems are mainly
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based so students have no opportunity to learn mathematical skill even small subtraction and addition they cannot count without a
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.
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Children are too much addicted to
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games rather than other outdoor activities and
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our future generation are becoming more machine dependent and physically disable and it results seems like in near future horror science fiction will be true. A
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point is that
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hard disk crash and viruses are like natural disasters and make our
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literally impossible.
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, there are quite plausible reasons how the
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is becoming the part and parcel of our everyday
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. What can be cited
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regarding
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is due to communication and information technology now World is in our
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hands
. Anyone can reach any corner of
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the world within
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. There are so many ways to communicate with each
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other, such
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as email, online
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chats
, voice mail, video chat etc. To clarify
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matter from home any one takes part in a job interview, conference or any online class. He/she does not need to go there
physically but
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physically, but
in the digital world, it is possible. What's
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more, online
marketing, banking etc.
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Make
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more convenient so we can enjoy a strong personal relationship.
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but not the least, any business and
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office
work can be accomplished efficiently because of electronic data management,
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, electronic files are easily stored and maintained rather than paper documents. In
a nutshell taki
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nutshell, taking
ng all the aforementioned pros and cons into account, I personally opine that
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is the most wonderful gift of our
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Revolutionized
  • Instant access
  • Productivity
  • Streamlining
  • Prolonged use
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Dependency
  • Over-reliance
  • Vulnerability
  • Technical failures
  • Data privacy
  • Cybersecurity threats
  • Identity theft
  • Work-life balance
  • Stress and burnout
  • Automation
  • Efficiency
  • Entertainment options
  • Educational content
  • Staying informed
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