The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the number of social networking
sites
visited by internet users
in Canada in 2014 and in
2015. We can see from the data that, in general, there was a growing tendency to use more than one site.
Change preposition
apply
Although
just over one fifth
of internet Add a hyphen
one-fifth
users
did not use any social networking sites
in either of the years, the proportion in this
category decreased from 22 percent
in 2014 to 21 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015. In both years the highest proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
users
in any group fell into the ‘One site’ category. However
, this
group declined sharply from 36 percent
in 2014 to 28 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015.
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per cent
In contrast
, the numbers who reported using two sites
, three sites
, four sites
and five sites
all grew over the period analysed. In both years the proportion of internet users
fell as the number of social networking sites
increased, with only 2 percent
using five Change the spelling
per cent
sites
in 2014 compared to 4 percent
in 2015.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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