Many people believe that the increase presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for rising incident of violent crimes among youth society. They argue that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this arguments

It is believed that the rising of juvenile delinquency is associated with the widespread violence

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showing in the mass media;

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, the

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should control the amount of violence

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in those media.

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, I partly agree with

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argument as the increase of youth crimes is not only the responsibility of the mass media. It is true that the appearance of violence in the mass media may adversely impact on teenagers'

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.

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is simply because teenagers are not mature enough to identify violent

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and understand potential consequences of those behaviours. They may commit a crime by imitating anti-social

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that they have learnt from criminal programs on television.

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, the media

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should be censored by the

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strictly, which will contribute to reduce the possibility that teenagers are exposed to those negative behaviours.

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, apart from

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' controlling for media

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, education

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plays an important role in reducing youth criminals. By telling teenagers right from wrong, parents and educators are both responsible to develop the

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generations to be upright and disciplined citizens.

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, young people are less likely to commit a crime if they feel to be cared by families and in their schools. In

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sense, preventing young people from crime cannot be achieved only by the

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. To conclude, I concede that the

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should control media

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in order to reduce the youth

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, I am convinced that young people should

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be educated about what they can do or cannot do.