In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the adavantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is considered in some countries children take
break
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breaks
after finishing
study
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the study
of
school
and before joining tertiary education to
travel
around the world or involved in jobs.
This
essay will discuss both merits and
dermits
of a
year
gap
study
of
student
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the student
. Several advantages are there when
student
visit different places of
work
in a
year
gap
before starting tertiary education after completion of
school
life
.
Firstly
, if the students visit unknown places they will become
familiarise
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familiarised
with the
culture
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cultural
tradition and lifestyles of people living around. And
,
Accept space
,
also
they get time to relax and refresh their mind rather than
study
.
Secondly
, pupil when involved in
work
they will become
socialise
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socialised
and learn how hard it’s to earn
money
and understand about the
life
.
For instance
, children are dependent
kn
located at or attached to
on
can
parents ask
money
from them when necessary so they don’t know the value of
money
as they have no idea how hard to earn
money
.
Hence
, if children
work
they will
realised
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realise
the importance of
money
.
Thirdly
, with
travel
and
work
children can develop their interpersonal skill
such
as
confident
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confidentiality
, hard working, intelligent, self esteem,
independent
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independence
and so on. Despite of
this
, they will
also
come to know how the world is running so they become for serious about the
life
to get
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
.
However
, it should not be compulsory for all students by government rather than
student
and
parents
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parents'
parent
agreement.
Hence
,
gap
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a gap
is crucial after getting
school
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schooled
certificate and before joining
university
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the university
. In other hand, some of the disadvantages
can
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can also take
also
takes place.
Firstly
,
student
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the student
might change their mind after having
a
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an
experience of
work
or
travel
. Some
student
like to continue the same
work
or
travel
so it’s will adversely affect in their positive thinking about the
study
. Recent research has
revaealed
make visible
revealed
that 90%
student
does not like to go back to university once they get a
gap
after
school
.
Moreover
, young people can be
influence
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influenced
by outside lifestyle when they
travel
to different places so they can
indulged
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indulge
in bad habits like smoking, drinking alcohol
,
Accept space
,
drus
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
which negatively effect on their growth. So parents should be careful with their every
acitivities
any specific behavior
activity
.
Thus
,
student
with a
gap
year
also have
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also has
merits
on
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of
their
life
. To sum up, it has both pros as well as cons if Tenneger get a
gap
of
year
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a year
years
the year
before
geting
the act of acquiring something
getting
admission in university. A
year
gap
rule should not be mandatory and parents play a crucial role to
encouarge
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
children
for
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in
their choice
then
the advantages
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
the
disdavantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
.
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