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THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. What do you think about that

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Forest
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 plays as a vital role in the balance of nature.
Interdependence
Suggestion
The interdependence
 of living creatures, tree and plants are necessary for survival and
continuation
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the continuation
 of
life
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. Without
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forest
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the forest
, the cycle of
life
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 is broken and all kinds of
life
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 on the earth will not be
possibe
capable of happening or existing
possible
passive
. The
forest
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 has several important uses. The
forest
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 is the home many living creatures
such
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 as animals and birds. These creatures build their houses in the
forest
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 and obtain food from the trees.
from
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From
 the trees in the
forest
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, we obtain
wood
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.
we
Suggestion
We
 use it in doing work
such
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 as cooking.
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forest
the trees and other plants in a large densely wooded area
Forest
also
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 needs to be preserved for atmospheric reasons.
the
Suggestion
The
 process of photosynthesis helps to purify the air in the sense that it removes carbon dioxide from the atmosphere and at the same produces oxygen which is used by
living organism
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living organisms
a living organism
 in respiration.
another
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Another
 important role of the
forest
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 is the hardy
wood
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 or timber
that is
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 obtained from some trees.
the
Suggestion
The
wood
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 is used for making of furniture, buildings and others.
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wood
the hard fibrous lignified substance under the bark of trees
Wood
 as teak, pine are exported in large quantities to other countries.
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thus
Suggestion
Thus
 the
forest
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 plays an important part in the economy of a country.
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forest
the trees and other plants in a large densely wooded area
Forest
 protects many forms of
life
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.
without
Suggestion
Without
forest
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 almost all forms of
life
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 are not possible
forest
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 should be preserved for the good of all things whether it is mankind or animals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • carbon sequestration
  • sustainable forest management
  • ecosystem
  • climate regulation
  • habitat preservation
  • renewable resources
  • environmental balance
  • conservation
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